I am unhappy with this layout. I feel that the picture is not correct for the article. It makes the artist seem miserable and uninspiring which is not what I want to get across considering they are supposed to be a bright new star. The layout also makes the article look boring and nothing special which would not attract the consumers attention. I also think that the white background makes the spaces not filled look larger and swallows up the rest of the page which makes it look blank and not filled with an interesting article. I do not like the flat looking title either. I need to add a shadow and get rid of the black outline becasue it makes it look boring and very 2D which will not make it stand out.
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